Monday, October 11, 2010

Retropunk page 1


Channeling my inner Syd Mead/Tsutomu Nihei on this one and trying to play with more action to my usual "static" seinen layouts.
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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousOctober 12, 2010 at 1:23 AM

    You either need to use more tones to separate planes, or vary your line widths. Each panel is too uniform in line and negative/positive space so there aren't any focal points. It hurts the eyes and is hard to read x_x

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  2. Jhomar SorianoOctober 12, 2010 at 1:34 AM

    Sounds like you know what you're saying, do you have a homepage I could check out?

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