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Philippine-based illustrator and father of three. His published works are MR. GRIEVES and ARKHAM WOODS for Seven Seas Entertainment, where each has been awarded in the 2007 and 2009 International Manga Award of Japan and LIAR'S KISS, a crime-noir graphic novel for Top Shelf Productions and many more. He likes Jidaigeki and Zombie films.

Monday, October 11, 2010

Retropunk page 1

Channeling my inner Syd Mead/Tsutomu Nihei on this one and trying to play with more action to my usual "static" seinen layouts.


Anonymous said...

You either need to use more tones to separate planes, or vary your line widths. Each panel is too uniform in line and negative/positive space so there aren't any focal points. It hurts the eyes and is hard to read x_x

Jhomar Soriano said...

Sounds like you know what you're saying, do you have a homepage I could check out?